I liked what this group did for their project, the way they talked about their project was very clear and concise. I loved how they changed the story and made it their own because it was interesting to see a classic story with a twist. Their was good flow from start to finish during the presentation, and I also like how everyone was involved and engaged. I also thought it was a good idea to compare their own version to the original because that was a great way to show the differences between the two. The visual aid was very helpful and allowed the audience to see what they were talking about. Great project from start to finish! Group 2 TMNT: Kelli, Curt, Justine, Kurt, Augstine, Eric
We feel that this was a very good project. We liked how you took that actual movie and then twisted it around to make it your own. We also liked how like children's books you made your own moral to the story even if you were unaware of it. We like how you gave the similarities between the movie and your story as well as the differences. It really showed how much time and effort that you put into it. We like how you drew your own pictures and used actual pictures. It was very good and very easy to follow. It was super creative. Good Job!:) Something that you might be able to work on is trying to go more outside the box and create something totally different. Group #1 Chrissy, Monica, Laurel,& Stacey.
I really liked this project! It was a unique idea to rewrite a Disney story, but address current issues like bullying and such. A few things that I liked was how it was presented in class using a powerpoint and how there was a comparitive slide at the end that compared the orginal version and the one you guys wrote. This made it easy to follow and anaylze and compare! One thing that I would recommend is adding your slides and charts to the blog and the descriptions inbetween each picture to make it easier for people to navigate and understand you blog.
I liked the idea of found nemo. The presentation was good, and so were the pictures you all drew. I liked how you chose to switch up a disney movie. I also thought that you stole our idea for a picture book! But all in all i think it was a good presentation, and was fun as well.
I liked what this group did for their project, the way they talked about their project was very clear and concise. I loved how they changed the story and made it their own because it was interesting to see a classic story with a twist. Their was good flow from start to finish during the presentation, and I also like how everyone was involved and engaged. I also thought it was a good idea to compare their own version to the original because that was a great way to show the differences between the two. The visual aid was very helpful and allowed the audience to see what they were talking about. Great project from start to finish!
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We feel that this was a very good project. We liked how you took that actual movie and then twisted it around to make it your own. We also liked how like children's books you made your own moral to the story even if you were unaware of it. We like how you gave the similarities between the movie and your story as well as the differences. It really showed how much time and effort that you put into it. We like how you drew your own pictures and used actual pictures. It was very good and very easy to follow. It was super creative. Good Job!:) Something that you might be able to work on is trying to go more outside the box and create something totally different.
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I really liked this project! It was a unique idea to rewrite a Disney story, but address current issues like bullying and such. A few things that I liked was how it was presented in class using a powerpoint and how there was a comparitive slide at the end that compared the orginal version and the one you guys wrote. This made it easy to follow and anaylze and compare! One thing that I would recommend is adding your slides and charts to the blog and the descriptions inbetween each picture to make it easier for people to navigate and understand you blog.
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I liked the idea of found nemo. The presentation was good, and so were the pictures you all drew. I liked how you chose to switch up a disney movie. I also thought that you stole our idea for a picture book! But all in all i think it was a good presentation, and was fun as well.
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